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Comments from WantSumCandyLittleGirl
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2010-06-01 18:20:44 | Daddy's Naughty Daughters | Why don't you own up and give credit where credit is due? This is a rip off of an actually published book you downloaded from an old story site - White Shadow. What a sick fuck - can't even acknowledge that you plagarized the entire story. |
| 2010-06-01 18:46:17 | Young Erin | Great story telling and excellent twist at the end. Bringing the sister up for round two seems the perfect next chapter. Thanks. Keep up the great work. |
| 2010-06-01 18:58:55 | Young Erin | Great story telling and excellent twist at the end. Bringing the sister up for round two seems the perfect next chapter. Thanks. Keep up the great work. |
| 2010-06-01 21:28:54 | Their Valentine Surprises | Simply awesome story - could barely keep my hands from masturbation. Great writing, great plot, great action. Thanks. |
| 2010-06-03 00:18:50 | The Necklace of Love | Good story, although you do need to work on some of the spelling and some of the word choices. If you have one, use a grammar checker to make sure the wording and words are correct for the sentence. If you can find someone to proofread it and make editing marks, do so. Be careful with that, though - you never know what they might think or say. Outside that, good plot and story line. Your next story should be fine with some editing. |